When I wrote this poem some years ago, I thought it was a bit boring. Such plain subjects: a kitchen, baking, a woman. Now, reading it again, I love it. Plain or no, simple things are beautiful. Reading it, I remember my mom. She is the subject of this poem. And I remember the grateful, trusting emotion I felt living in my parents’ home and realize how rare and precious that was.
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The kitchen is silent, graceful
with uneasy cat’s grace
of sunlight on yellow carnations
gilded like miniature suns.
Stray sounds waft around—
burr-whirr of mixer—tick-tock of clock—
firm tread of feet calloused in flip flops.
Their flop-flok rattles the stove.
A woman with soft stribbled hair
works contented; steps over an egg
that has spilled from its shell; her
blue dress spattered with water.
Her arms are sun-browned and spotted
like full-ripened apples, her
forehead creased gently with wilt lines.
Her face opens wide in a smile.
Thighs cool against smooth oak chair—
sun rays stream through the window—
my skin reaches for the warmth.
Salty sweetness explodes on my tongue and
drifts to my nose. Smooth hard chocolate chips,
peanut butter, oatmeal, vanilla—
the oven poofs a gassy burst—the
kitchen curls, waiting, along the wall.
I like this.
I love this, Lucinda. Such a vivid poem. Thank you for sharing!
This is soo good! I like it a lot!
Thank you Lucinda.